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I know you'd like extreme criticism for this piece, but I honestly cannot find a single flaw in it. Seriously. The onyl thing I can find is that the branch she's holding, on her right hand, seems as though it were colored too far into her hand--there's a little brown on her hand where the branch is supposed to end, see? Other than that one thing, there is no mistake in this piece. Excellent, excellent work! *fave*
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Add some minor shading on the folds on her haori at the top part where her shoulder is. That seems a little bland and flat. At first her left arm (right for us) seemed a little out of proportion by being too short compared to the other arm, but I think it could just be perspective views varying, too. Like her arm is pulled back more to make it seem shorter. o_o I dunno.
Aaand that's all I can see.
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